I have a few ideas for stories that I've written down over the years. I'm not a writer and will never do anything with them so I thought I'd post them. They are all copyright but distributed using the Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 United States license
. If, by some remote chance, someone actually wants to use one of these for commercial purposes, please contact me.
Oh, one more thing. These are just ideas not finished books/movies/etc, some aren't more than simple concepts.
Now, on to idea number 1...
An very unsavory looking character walks down a residential street (latin american?) 20+ year old cars, houses, etc
He sees a young (5-8?) boy playing, obviously farther away from his home than he should be.
He kidnaps the boy (entices with candy, possibly) and drives away with him
Shot of mother calling for him.
Short snapshots of his life.
Abuse, chains/ropes, hard labor of different kinds, last is working in factory making illegal drugs.
One or more freinds among other slaves are killed, badly beaten.
Escapes by causing fire/explosion (expensive for drug lord) (16 years old at this point?)
Runs, almost caught several times, beaten, shot, hurt
Poor furtive existance, found by henchmen several times, but always escapes (never fights back)
Longish (3 years?) period of 'safety'.
Comes home from work to find roommate (not close freind, but still...) dead, killer waiting for him
Starts to run, but snaps
See brief glimpse of him as a child, playing, reflected across his eyes.
Killer chases but literally runs into him as he stops
Starts working his way back up drug lord henchman chain
Finally corners drug lord in his largest warehouse/factory, but badly wounded and heavily outnumbered.
Drug lord was scared but sees situation has changed and starts to gloat.
Hero glances at crate that we saw being delivered earlier (child flashes across his eyes again)
Something on crate lets viewer know that Hero was responsible for it being delivered.
Drug lord notices glance and is immediately suspicious.
Hero points gun at crate and smiles.
Fade to distance, large explosion, followed by other smaller ones, building is completely toast
Another child looking similar to first, but obviously different (modern cars in background, etc), playing farther from home than he should
Unsavory character (different from first) approaches child, but slowly grows transparent, blows away on wind like smoke (hint of flames?).
Child looks around, but sees nothing.
Image of Hero flashes across his eyes.
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